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Hi,
1) "Hungry Planet: What the World Eats" is a fascinating book published in October 2007 in "Speakeasy Magazine" where two photographers, Peter Menzel and his wife "Faith dâAluisio", take us on a culinary world tour (France, USA, Egypt, Greenland, Japan, Bosnia and Chad including ) for visiting thirty families for capturing what they eat during the course of one week. In this way, each familyâs is taken alongside their weekly groceries.
2) On the picture 1, we see the Aboubakar family sitting on carpet in front of their tent. The family is made up of one mother and his children, probably aged of 2 and 18 years-old. At the front, we see, on carpet, their weekly groceries. We note they are rather poor. In effect, they are in one Breidjing Refugee Camp. We remark they will feed notably of Grains, Other Starchy Foods, Fruits, Vegetables & Nuts, and drink water exclusively.
â On the photograph 2, they show the Revis family in the kitchen of their home in Raleigh. She is made up of one boy who holds a pizza. Too, we see her parents behind to him. They have the smile. Nearby of the Revis family, there is a lot of food and drink's mark on the table. These people aren't in need.
Thanks
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1) The last bit of the sentence should read:
"...each family is taken alongside their weekly groceries".
You had written "family's" that is not right.
2) My suggestion: if you have a picture of the family just label it as "This is the Aboubakar family."
Don't describe what they doing in the picture as obviously the reader will be able to see it themselves.
"The family is made up of a single mum with her two children, their age is probably 2 and 18 years."
"We note that they must be of low income family."
Suggestion instead of writing this sentence: We remark they will feed notably of Grains, Other Starchy Foods, Fruits, Vegetables & Nuts, and drink water exclusively.
Write instead:
"Their nutrition mostly likely consists of grains, starchy foods, fruits, vegetable and nuts".
Picture 2:
Suggestion: Remove this sentences: She is made up of one boy who holds a pizza. Too, we see her parents behind to him. They have the smile. Nearby of the Revis family, there is a lot of food and drink's mark on the table. These people aren't in need.
Instead write:
The family consists of a boy and his parents. They seem like a middle class family with foods (pizza) and drinks as part of their normal diet.
Suggestion: again do not discribe the picture as the reader will be able to see for themselves.
1) The last bit of the sentence should read:
"...each family is taken alongside their weekly groceries".
You had written "family's" that is not right.
2) My suggestion: if you have a picture of the family just label it as "This is the Aboubakar family."
Don't describe what they doing in the picture as obviously the reader will be able to see it themselves.
"The family is made up of a single mum with her two children, their age is probably 2 and 18 years."
"We note that they must be of low income family."
Suggestion instead of writing this sentence: We remark they will feed notably of Grains, Other Starchy Foods, Fruits, Vegetables & Nuts, and drink water exclusively.
Write instead:
"Their nutrition mostly likely consists of grains, starchy foods, fruits, vegetable and nuts".
Picture 2:
Suggestion: Remove this sentences: She is made up of one boy who holds a pizza. Too, we see her parents behind to him. They have the smile. Nearby of the Revis family, there is a lot of food and drink's mark on the table. These people aren't in need.
Instead write:
The family consists of a boy and his parents. They seem like a middle class family with foods (pizza) and drinks as part of their normal diet.
Suggestion: again do not discribe the picture as the reader will be able to see for themselves.
Family problems I need serious advice?
Muhamad
I've had a very bad past. I am 19 years and I did a lot of things in the past that am not proud of, I even went to prison, I use to steal from people, I dropped out of high school, me and my uncle fucked the same prostitute while I was 15 thus I lost my virginity. I use all types of drugs, I knock my other uncle teeth out, I used to fight with teachers I even made a lady cry by insulting her top to bottom, the list goes on. But I could say also I was neglected in the past and whip a lot when I was a kid, my died of lupus when I was a child, and my father used to work in a foreign country (usa)I used see him once in 2 years he used to visit for a month a go. I was raised by uncaring distant relative who were in only for the money my dad used to send. Also they used to report me at my school where I used to be insulted and beaten I was so exposed to everybody ...i was born in a refugee camp in kenya in a tent and i grew up in in kenya..people believe by scorning or beating somebody is a way of discipline...am not good at anything ..i dont talk to people nor smile and never laugh..i grew up with no fun,games tv playstation ..am not physcal..am a heavy smoker cozi hate myself and my teeth are crap..is there hope for me..plz don't be rude..thanx
Answer
everyone has a story,some are better than others but we all have one. but i believe that almost everyone is able to be redeemed.i clearly dont know you and although you said what you have been through i dont actually understand because its not my life, however i don't think your a bad person, just someone who has had a harsh life and i think you need to work on it.you need to work through the anger/hate/depression or whatever else it is that your feeling in order for you to be happy and to have a good life without hurting those around you. you have done a lot of things that are not good but that doesnt make you yourself a bad person it just means that you did bad things..you are not always your actions ..you need to face what you have done and you basicly need to face yourself as well as those that you have hurt emotionally/physically. do that and you will be happy and become the persom who, deep down you know you are, show that person to the worl. have the courage to face yourself .
everyone has a story,some are better than others but we all have one. but i believe that almost everyone is able to be redeemed.i clearly dont know you and although you said what you have been through i dont actually understand because its not my life, however i don't think your a bad person, just someone who has had a harsh life and i think you need to work on it.you need to work through the anger/hate/depression or whatever else it is that your feeling in order for you to be happy and to have a good life without hurting those around you. you have done a lot of things that are not good but that doesnt make you yourself a bad person it just means that you did bad things..you are not always your actions ..you need to face what you have done and you basicly need to face yourself as well as those that you have hurt emotionally/physically. do that and you will be happy and become the persom who, deep down you know you are, show that person to the worl. have the courage to face yourself .
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